It’s funny how cartoons change.
I keep a box next to my drafting table full of slips of paper with ideas. I don’t draw anything on them, they’re just covered with gags.
A standard page usually has three or four hastily scratched jokes, and they marinate in the box for a while until I pick three at random to draw up.
What’s weird is how a gag I haven’t looked at in months all of a sudden becomes immediately clearer to me; the shortcomings instantaneously apparent, as is the probable solution.
Here’s an example:
The original caption:
“Listen, I don’t wanna use the shredder. Frankie don’t wanna use the shredder. But you gotta tell me what I wanna know right now or they’re gonna get the shredder!”
I’d considered adding some sorta swear words for emphasis…
“…or they’re gonna get the Goddamn shredder!”
“…or they’re gonna get the freakin’ shredder!”
…but the whole thing just reeked of trying too hard.
The amended caption:
“Just tell me what I wanna know!”
Not bad, but still pretty weak.
The final caption:
Ahhh… There it is.
Not that shorter is always better; sometimes a wordy caption is perfect, but not this time.
Anyway, it’s weird how it works. I knew immediately that the original caption sucked (although when I originally wrote it, it seemed perfect), and the amended caption came right away, but the one-word caption occurred as I was inking it, which is later than normal, but you learn to just accept gags when and how they happen.
Plus I get to draw a strip of paper people about to be shredded by mobsters. That’s fun too.